A concise tagline with strong verbs grabs your attention and gives you a good first impression of the company (or person) itโs associated with. Conversely, a rambling tagline with weak verbs and clunky construction might leave you with a โmehโ impression.
There’s one piece of information your instructions might be missing that will really help your users.
You’ve likely seen the “smiley ranking” at stores. IMHO, it could use a little tweak to be more effective.
When I was trying to find a subletter for one of my apartments, I decided to write the most complete apartment ad in the history of apartment ads.
I bring an early aughts website into the present with a fresh design and better post titles.
During a website redesign, I took some data that wasn’t helping anyone and made it more meaningful with the help of a pie chart.